Crit feedback.

Really good crit. Was great to see where everyone else is up to, and got some good feedback.

Art ward feedback
Possible scope for expansion: Mag ads, leaflets, publication with work to buy, exhibition guide
Possibly move '+' up to the ascender height to make it look more like a 't'
Are the arrows around the exhibition unnecessary

End of year show feedback
Play with how it folds - french fold? - push 'take a peek'
Use teaser images rather than the full images

Type design feedback
Make sure research comes through more
Show typeface in context and put in publication
Convert to shapes rather than strokes - weights
Colour?

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