Questions for crit.

Design context
(there is a black and white printed copy out, but you can view a digital mock up further down my blog)
- Keeping with my concept, i've tried to go for a simple approach. Do you think it should be more informative?
- Any feedback on layout?
Ignore the cover - that's still in development.

Pica cafe
- Is the whole type theme coming through enough or do you think I should push it further?
- Colour - red or should I go back to the original orange?

Flatland
This is a quick experimental 2 day brief playing with how a book is read.
- Is it working? Is there too much white space? My aim was to emphasise the breaks between chapters, paragraphs etc.

- What briefs do you think are my substantial briefs?

General feedback on anything is much appreciated.