Change of format?

It was getting a little boring working with the standard A3 format so I've had a go at changing the scale slightly so it's smaller in width.

I'm quite liking the large space at the top. I'm thinking it might be a little too dull for the tone of voice I was going for but i'm not sure. I think this is something to bring up in my progress tutorial tomorrow.

Also not sure if it's easy to follow and whether I've got all the relevant information up there. Or even if there's too much information. Again something to talk about tomorrow.