Had a tutorial with Joe this afternoon and I took with me what I have for the Art Ward brief.
He said as a set its working really well, and the logo is nice. He mentioned that the legibility on the posters is something to look into, which was something i'd noticed but wasn't sure on. Just altering the contrast or applying a dark filter could solve this, or even play around with duotones. Joe also suggested changing all images to black and white as some are looking sepia, this could help bring out the green a bit more.
Joe also suggested changing the layout slightly, so that the logo was in the top corner as it seemed to be a little lost and the last thing you get to. It should be one of the first things you look at as it's quite important.
Overall he really liked the project. Just final amendments to make now and some signage mock ups and it should be done.
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